here
Specific words or phrases to
demonstrate my writer’s voice in my post the worst thing about my book: Fahrenheit
451 is when I say “I don't think they should burn such great sources of
knowledge even if it might threaten their power, their being the government or
whoever runs America now.” This specific phrase shows you my opinion on the
fact that the government is burning books which helps to strengthen my voice
and give the readers a chance to connect with my piece because since it’s an opinion
they might disagree or agree with me. I also demonstrate good writer’s voice
when I say “I believe learning and hearing about different perspectives is very
important because it can help us figure out our own perspective on life
and others matters and it also keeps us open to new ideas and opinions.” This is
showing you again my take on the topic of burning books and how I believe it
can help us in our everyday life. These examples demonstrate great use of my
writer’s voice.
The punctuation in my piece allows
the readers to think and to connect to my writing. For example when I ask the
questions “Do you think burning books is the best part of the book? Do you
think burning the books is a justified thing to do?” Again this is allowing my
readers to connect to my piece and to get their own opinions about burning
books. I put this type of syntax at the end to leave the readers thinking about
my piece so once they finished reading my piece wouldn’t just escape their mind
because no one when writing wants a forgettable piece. I use some elevated diction in my piece like “Perspective”
“justified” and “threaten”. Although these words can be well known there are
lower, informal words that could be used in their place. For example for
perspective you could say opinion, or for justified you could use the words is
it right, and lastly for threaten you could say harm or endanger. So therefore
by using this elevated diction it really helps my piece sound like a more
serious type of writing but at the same time I don’t use too much elevated
diction to where it becomes not understandable or relatable. I placed my
elevated diction all around my piece, trying to spread them out so I wouldn’t over
whelm my reader with it.
I believe my Fahrenheit 415 post
had my best writer’s voice in it because it emphasized my writer’s voice well,
and my use of diction and syntax. These all being very important puzzle pieces
to writing a great voice piece and writing piece in general. Which is why I
picked it to be the piece I did my final blogger reflection over.
No comments:
Post a Comment